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Jeremy stared with his mouth hanging slightly open, astonishment and surprise written all over his face.
"I did it!" Aelita exclaimed triumphantly, grinning widely.
"But… you… How?" Jeremy spluttered. His look of surprise was so comical, Aelita had to laugh.
Jeremy kept staring. No, this… this wasn't right. It was luck. Or, was it… a fluke, maybe, in his strategy? But… he had checked, and there were no flukes. No…
"You… you didn't!"
"Yes, I did, Jeremy. Admit it."
"But…" He stared once more. All the evidence was there. She had done it.
"Admit it," Aelita repeated tauntingly, obviously enjoying it too much.
"You know," Odd said as he sauntered over with that annoying grin, "princess is right."
Jeremy sighed for the second time in less than that many minutes
"Admit it," Aelita said once again, smile not dampening.
"Okay, okay, I admit it. Aelita, you've beaten me at chess."
Late submission for Jerlita week...
Since Jeremy is like, super smart and all and has probably never had anybody beat him in chess, I thought it would be funny for Aelita to beat him.
Short and to the point. It was pretty fun to write, despite it's shortness.... :)
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spikeambrose Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is funny and totally plausible :D
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Adventurer411 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!
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NecromancerSteve Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Awww, well that was cute
And she is the only one who ever could beat jeremie, other than himself :P
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Adventurer411 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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LyokoGal Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
Aelita was a little bit of a sore winner though...
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Adventurer411 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A bit, but that was the point, since no one had ever beaten Jeremy before.
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LyokoGal Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
LOL!!!!!!!!!!! HILARIOUS! I doubt I could beat Jeremie at chess...
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Adventurer411 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me too. I'm not horrible at it or anything, but I don't think I'd be good enough to beat Jeremy XD
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LyokoGal Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
I haven't played in a while so...
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Adventurer411 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me neither.
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